I FINALLY DID IT!!!!!! I FINALLY posted the re-done first chappie. I AM SO SORRY IT TOOK SO LONG!!!
So much crap got in the way, it was RIDICULOUS.
But I like this version MUCH better, and I think you guys wiil too!
I did some editing to the gallery, so if you just click 'browse gallery' it should be in the folder 'shifters story'